Sunday, May 8, 2011

50 word story

Awaken by the sound of his house alarm, John gets up to check what happened. Halfway down the stairs John hears whispering. Fear takes over John, he tries to run back up to his room tripping over the last step causing a thud. He hears the steps creaking John crawls into the closet. The sounds stop, John thinking its all a dream relaxes. The closet door opens...
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2 comments:

  1. Alonzo JMay 8, 2011 at 6:24 PM

    What an exciting ending reminds me of the ending to Inception where the viewer was left wondering, breaking the boundary between what is real and what is not. Good Work!

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  2. AnonymousMay 15, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    I agree with Alonzo, the ending left me captivated. Its interesting how you didn't describe who/what the thing is that set off the house alarm. I think it makes it all the more scary.

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