I rushed out of the car, out of breathe and out of time. A single tear ebbed from my eye as I watch the two boats take ship. "I am too late..."
In ten minutes my two best friends would suffer a most cruel fate, tied to explosives rigged to blow in less than four minutes I was their only hope, and I failed.
As one last "gesture of faith" their captor left a white speedboat, in the dash pictures of Alex and Sam at our high school graduation nearly 10 years ago. I grabbed the steering wheel and jerked it left "Now its personal."
You can really make a movie from this, reading this I can picture the two boats the dedication and the danger the narrator is about to experience.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Vitaliy, and also I like how you added an hint of suspense with the use of time.
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