A soon-to-be impressive compendium of reflections and research in Genre Studies by high school students in NYC (with very short arms).
Thursday, April 14, 2011
..50 word essay
He was the golden boy, everyone loves him. My heart wretch as I saw him with her hand in hand walking down the beach. I couldn’t help but put on a smile when he sees me and waves. I wave back, wondering if he knew. Maybe it better this way.
I love the plot but you just have to fix the tense and I think you're missing a word but overall, i like it.
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