Saturday, April 16, 2011

"Bloodline" (The Lost Prince)

Quiet the women whispered. They are coming. Listen. There is someone very powerful and he is after you. You should go to Highroad inn look for a blind man named Howler. He will help you out. And. That was the last thing she said before someone busted the wooden door.

2 comments:

  1. I suggest that you should add quotation marks to know what is spoken and what is narrated.

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  2. i conquer with david, but other than that this is a very interesting piece

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