Thursday, April 28, 2011
50 word flash story
White light filled with dew shines through the closed window. Light colored candles dispersed through the room, their fire extinguished. A bottle of champagne on the table, popped open, empty. Two glass cups, one of them used, the other, untouched. Young female on the floor, dress spotless, life, no more.
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Woah! This is a 50 word story that had me hooked on every detail. I could visualize and analyze it at the same time. The question you have at the end when you reread it is... What happened to her? If you use this for the full length story project, I definately want to read it.
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