Thursday, April 28, 2011

50 Word Short Story by Paul

Gripping her grandfather’s razor, Mandy shredded her skin onto the tiled bathroom floor.


Walking in, her grandfather took a moment to reflect how breathtaking she looked, recumbent, in a puddle of blood and sliced skin -- like a Disney princess. “I’ve wanted to play with you for years” he said, pleasuring himself..


4 comments:

  1. I'm not sure this could get any creepier. Well done Paul.

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  2. it seems like there's a extremely twisted relationship between the grandfather and granddaughter. the slicing pieces of skin off reminds me of SAW. good job paul :)

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  3. i agree with Lizzy and Stephanie's comments, i like how you started of with the skin cutting and then ended in the grandfather's fantasy of his granddaughter.

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  4. I agree with Stephanie and Lizzy. This definitely reminds me of the SAW and this is completely sick, Paul. I think I'm terrified.

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