Wednesday, April 27, 2011

50 Word Story

As they slowly kissed, Kevin was looking into the eyes of another woman. I came home. My heart shattered.

2 comments:

  1. I like that this is so short and simple..yet just reading this so many things go through the mind, as to what is the possible scenario among the characters

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  2. This is amazing. Like Monika said, it's really simple but says so much about the character, the narrator in fact.

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