Thursday, April 28, 2011

50 word story.

Nothing will be the way it had been
For the young american boy of 18

He admired her hair, the way she rolled her tongue
The spanish beauty shouldnt have died so young

She left for her country, and he followed her through
He loved her, you see, the young girl of 22.
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2 comments:

  1. Jade SMay 4, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    I love this! So far this is the only 50 word story I have read that has a rhyming sequence to it and the story is just captivating.

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  2. David CMay 8, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    I really like this 50 word story, I like how it rhymes at the end of each part.

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