I remember my parents fairly well
We celebrated some birthdays together
We went to the park together, sometimes…
They started to yell at each other and they barely acknowledged me
We got into our car and they were still arguing
My dad ran a red light while arguing and then…
This is such a good flash fiction! I didn't even see it coming and you succeeded in writing 50 words while telling the reader so much.
ReplyDeleteI would have to agree that is a great piece.It says so much in a few words and the emotion that's behind it is powerful.
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